"All ye buccaneers out there that are up for the task, well, all you need to do is write a short flash fiction story in 200 words or fewer, excluding the title, around this month's theme of ADVENTURE!
For an extra challenge, begin your story with the words, “I set sail” (these three words will be included in the word count).
And for an even bigger challenge, use the same beginning words and end with the words: "my adventure continues!" (also included in the word count)."
For those who want to prove their Flash Fiction prowess, hit all of the above challenges, PLUS, make your story 200 words EXACTLY!"
I decided to give it a try and I accepted every challenge.
Here it is!
I set sail as the sun began to rise. I’d never been away from land. Now that I thought about it, I had never even
been above ground. The rocking motion
of the boat made my insides feel all jiggly.
I ached to see the boat, to see the water. I could feel the vibration of voices. Someone was talking. What were they saying?
My senses were so limited. I tried to look around me. All I could make out was light and
shadows. The longer we sailed, the more
light there was. I’d always wanted more
out of life then what I was given. Now I
had it. I was going somewhere and I was
getting nothing out of it. I’d never
been so mad at my inability to truly experience life.
I felt fingers
against my skin. My body was being manipulated
like I was clay. Cold metal pressed
against me. I flew through the air. I had to be getting close to the water. I was going to drown. I didn’t.
I was rescued. Now I am hanging from the
mouth of a gull. I may only be an
earthworm but my adventure continues.
That's a great twist at the end! When I started reading, I assumed the narrator was human, so to find out the story was from a worm's POV was a fun surprise. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks! I was worried it was to weird of an idea lol but I wanted it to be unique.
DeleteOoh - very cool. I'm with Erin, I totally thought the narrator was human. How fun! :) Thanks for taking the challenge!
ReplyDeleteIt was fun! I can't wait for the next one.
DeleteVery nice! I wonder what the rest of the adventure will be like.
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteVery creative indeed!
ReplyDeleteThanks! Its fun to let my wild imagination get away sometimes:)
DeleteLoved this! And who knew worms wanted adventures?! Maybe we should all think twice when spearing them on hooks to go fishing. :-)
ReplyDeleteGreat work, Sarah. I enjoyed this a lot.
Thank you! Oh and I have never been able to use a worm for bait. Ever lol.
DeleteWhat a fun POV! I'm with the folks above, I didn't realize he/she wasn't human until the end. Poor little worm. Maybe the gull drops him and he lives to make a whole host of worm babies to listen to his fantastic tale of adventure. :)
ReplyDeleteI think he landed in a nice garden somewhere :)
DeleteAwwww! Poor worm... unless of course it's a friendly gull who's going to take the worm away and show him/her the world. :) Nice story--good POV. :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!
DeleteFantastic twist you built in! You did an excellent job with this challenge - it's so fun to see the different spin everyone took! I love that about flash fiction and writing prompts...you never know where you'll end up!
ReplyDeleteHope you'll join us again in August - I've already got the prompts ready to go!
Thank you! I loved doing this challenge and I can't wait to see what the next one is.
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